Potted memories you bring
A bundle of hopes and dreams
Adding a purpose to our lives
But it's the present that makes memories
Potted memories you bring
A bundle of hopes and dreams
Adding a purpose to our lives
But it's the present that makes memories
26 comments:
someone is really the greatest poetess in bloggerville :D
indeed we have to live in the present because thats where life is and where hoes and dreams are born and memories cherished!
A very good one dear!
wowww... what a brilliant tribute to "Present".
present is the time which proves that we are still living so wat we had faced and have to face so many difficulties... so wat d dreams hv broken...we are alive today and celebrating life to no end.
lovely..lovely..lovely poem with an insight to life.
u rock divs... d grtst poet in bloggrville.
love n huggssssss
take care
@ lena and preeeti
i am on the mountain pinnacle :P not coming back :P thanks for those appreciating words ;) love u both :-*
lovely!!!!by jove!lovely!!no words 4 it..
That's a great poem Dumbi!I am jealous of you now :P
Indeed,it does not do to dwell in the past or dream of a future while just letting the gift of the present waste away.
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmaaa :)
@anwesa
thanks sweety :) means a lot :-*
@moti
i know u were always jealous of my *figure* :P
ummmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaa
encore encore!! yaar rite more of these luvely superb lines with the kadva sach of life.
now u call me budding poet ...u rite such brilliant piece of work ..huh!..my good div u rocked it ..:)..it has all the internal meaning of wat life means ..awesome :)..
rock on div..
urs..hemu..
aha...fresh..!!
loved those lines..
keep the good work coming, friend..!!
:)
Nice one cutie pie :)
@pj
more lines? more lines mere dimaag me nahi aate :(
@hemu
u always have good words for everyone :) thanks so much!
@vinz
will try vinz, thanks!
@hope
thanks di
OF course present is what matters, that's what creates the past and the future, but sometimes the past seems wonderful and the future seems hopeless
:)
yesz indeed living the present is quiote important.. sumtimes ur so busy introspecting life and ur past and future... that u forget to take part in the preset... nice poem...
Good one yaar !!! Keep on rocking :-)
Cheers :-)
@aneesh
bingo, i can see my hopeless future!
@armyguy
very true :) thanks!
@kathik
thanks karthik ;)
Hey nice past present future and a poem along it.Liked it....
wow...thats the first word that popped out when i read the first verse... gr8, i am meeting many awesome poets and poetesses here in bloggerville...!!
ps: blogrolling u...!!
yeah second last para is the best :P
@chagg
thanks ;)
@vinay
poetess? :O lol not really :P
thanks for blogrolling :)
@peter
thanks!
Good.
Keep composing more.
Tc.
I guess I'm jealous as well!! How do you write poems yaar??
*The greatest poet on blogger!*Divya
@indu
thanks :)
@shrav
lol :D who made you say this? :P
Hi Divz... first time here
wow... that is one of the best that I have read when it comes to people saying 'Live in the present and for the moment'...
I agree with Lena... there is a great poetess in da house...
take care and have a nice evening mate.. cheers...
@arv
Thanks for those sweet words arv, lena was just teasing me :P i made her say that :D
yeh tune likha hai??
where have u been hiding all this while sweetie... wow!
vandi,
:D so sweet, thanks vandi!
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