Within those unsightly eyes
That flinched many a soul
Behind those filthy clothes
Beneath the shaggy hair
And beyond the ugly face
P.S – Thanks to preeti for the second line of the third stanza :D :D
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you wrote it in 30 minutes?
i wont again call you the greatest poetess of bloggerville :P
But thats an incredibly beautiful poem, dear!
hey tat was cool!!
khoobsoorti hamesha chupi hoti hai
use taraashna padta hai
like diamond u see!!
@janu
yes :P but i always had an idea on what to write about inner beauty ;)
and this post was so necessary :P u know why!
thanks janu :-*
@pj
i loved what u said ;) Thanks sweetheart :)
well, u said in the PS wat i wanted to... :D
talking abt the poem, most of the times we forget tat the beauty doesnt comes with outer shell, it has to be the inner one which has to be beautiful!!
I always say, the external beauty u have, is gonna die with time, but wat a person u r, it cant ever!!
beautiful poem..
Cheers!!
ahhhhhh...... beauty with brains huh.. :)
no words 4 d poem. u hv to listen to my unspoken appreciations :)
lena is that u??? i tht u were busy with something thats why u werent visiting my blog...surprised to see u...
also, if u wont call lukkydivz the greatest poetess again, thats awesome...bcoz i definitely am going to...!! :) hats off to u divz for the poem...
incredible...even the third stanza...!! loved it...!!
umm... vinay, you just dont know div, if i dont comment here i am as good as dead and wont be able to comment anywhere at all :D
Will get back to your blog when i am done with my busy schedule :)
@ankur
i always knew u were mean!! :D
I always say, the external beauty u have, is gonna die with time, but wat a person u r, it cant ever!!
thats a nice compliment u gave me :P :P
@preeti
u lena and sami jsut dont need to say anything ;)
@vinay
lol lena loves me too much :P and i MADE lena comment on my post :P
u r too sweet!!
vinay lena is lying.. she knows i wont kill her..thats just an alibi..i hope u get it..u have all rights to kill her for not coming to ur blog :P :P
huh? first she says she MADE me comment on her blog and now she announces me a liar. Meanie!! :x
well, if calling ur poem beautiful is led to u giving me a name.. "meanie"... then i think i have to reconsider in future!! ;)
Also the fact, that as u said, u really are poor with the queens... reading third person in 1st, and that too out of context!! !:P
Cheers!!
P.S. btw... i dont know much abt u as a person yet, so may be u rnt wrong in reading it, just a lil early!!! :P
@janu
vinay, lena is again lying..she almost threatened me to post that comment! i know u trust me :P
@ankur
i called u mean for the first 2 lines of ur comment :P
I know u dint get that but u just gave me another reason to call u mean :) --->your second comment!
@lukky,
heheh...ok...kill lena?? no ways...she too sweet...
i know(or hope) she will come back to my blog soon!! :)
@lena,
:)
@lukky again...
i trust the both of u...!!
Beneath the shaggy hair
That forced them to puke.
I don't like thse 2 lines, cud have done better here if I go by th high benchmark tht u have set in ur writings.
Rest everything is peerless.
:)
Tc.
nice subject to write about... inner beauty is one of the most under appreciated beauties in this world :)
Sleep well mate... Good night... Cheers...
indu, i know :( just couldn't get better words :( u replace the line with something better :P
@arv
thanks arv, u sleep too early ;)
naaah.. am more of the sleepless kind... I dont go to sleep, sleep just takes over me :)
deep..!!
very cool!
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