Sunday, October 5, 2008

Trilogy



Potted memories you bring

Some sweet others horrifying

Even so you are held close

For all the lessons you've taught us



A bundle of hopes and dreams

But also unpredictable tragedies

Adding a purpose to our lives

You motivate us beyond rife



But it's the present that makes memories

Letting us live through hopes and dreams

Safe and fearless it makes us feel

The best of tenses and a present indeed




26 comments:

Lena said...

someone is really the greatest poetess in bloggerville :D
indeed we have to live in the present because thats where life is and where hoes and dreams are born and memories cherished!

A very good one dear!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

wowww... what a brilliant tribute to "Present".

present is the time which proves that we are still living so wat we had faced and have to face so many difficulties... so wat d dreams hv broken...we are alive today and celebrating life to no end.

lovely..lovely..lovely poem with an insight to life.

u rock divs... d grtst poet in bloggrville.

love n huggssssss

take care

lukkydivz said...

@ lena and preeeti

i am on the mountain pinnacle :P not coming back :P thanks for those appreciating words ;) love u both :-*

Anwesa said...

lovely!!!!by jove!lovely!!no words 4 it..

Sameera Ansari said...

That's a great poem Dumbi!I am jealous of you now :P

Indeed,it does not do to dwell in the past or dream of a future while just letting the gift of the present waste away.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmaaa :)

lukkydivz said...

@anwesa

thanks sweety :) means a lot :-*

@moti

i know u were always jealous of my *figure* :P

ummmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaa

Priya Joyce said...

encore encore!! yaar rite more of these luvely superb lines with the kadva sach of life.

Hemanth Potluri said...

now u call me budding poet ...u rite such brilliant piece of work ..huh!..my good div u rocked it ..:)..it has all the internal meaning of wat life means ..awesome :)..

rock on div..


urs..hemu..

Vinz said...

aha...fresh..!!
loved those lines..

keep the good work coming, friend..!!

:)

hope said...

Nice one cutie pie :)

lukkydivz said...

@pj

more lines? more lines mere dimaag me nahi aate :(

@hemu

u always have good words for everyone :) thanks so much!

@vinz

will try vinz, thanks!

@hope

thanks di

Aneesh said...

OF course present is what matters, that's what creates the past and the future, but sometimes the past seems wonderful and the future seems hopeless
:)

Anonymous said...

yesz indeed living the present is quiote important.. sumtimes ur so busy introspecting life and ur past and future... that u forget to take part in the preset... nice poem...

Karthik S said...

Good one yaar !!! Keep on rocking :-)

Cheers :-)

lukkydivz said...

@aneesh

bingo, i can see my hopeless future!

@armyguy

very true :) thanks!

@kathik

thanks karthik ;)

Chaggoholic.... said...

Hey nice past present future and a poem along it.Liked it....

Anonymous said...

wow...thats the first word that popped out when i read the first verse... gr8, i am meeting many awesome poets and poetesses here in bloggerville...!!

ps: blogrolling u...!!

peter said...

yeah second last para is the best :P

lukkydivz said...

@chagg

thanks ;)

@vinay

poetess? :O lol not really :P
thanks for blogrolling :)

@peter

thanks!

Indrajit said...

Good.
Keep composing more.
Tc.

Shravan Vijayaprasad said...

I guess I'm jealous as well!! How do you write poems yaar??

*The greatest poet on blogger!*Divya

lukkydivz said...

@indu

thanks :)

@shrav

lol :D who made you say this? :P

Arv said...

Hi Divz... first time here

wow... that is one of the best that I have read when it comes to people saying 'Live in the present and for the moment'...

I agree with Lena... there is a great poetess in da house...

take care and have a nice evening mate.. cheers...

lukkydivz said...

@arv

Thanks for those sweet words arv, lena was just teasing me :P i made her say that :D

IncorrigibleV said...

yeh tune likha hai??
where have u been hiding all this while sweetie... wow!

lukkydivz said...

vandi,

:D so sweet, thanks vandi!