Hearts connected by a hidden twine
To be great friends they were destined
Neither distance nor the spars
Could keep the two away
Over a jiffy
Moments of bliss
Shared in glee
And love
Prized
NONNET: A nonnet has nine lines. The first line has 9 syllables, the second line 8 syllables, the third line 7 syllables, etc... Until line nine finishes with 1 syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.
I dedicate my first nonnet to Lena, Sami and Preeti – my best friends here.
DAYS WITHOUT HER- 55 fiction
“You really have to go?”
“Yes, you know he is ill and my sister needs me ”
“Come back soon, will miss you”
“Will try to. Take care of yourself and the house”
Her HOME seemed to be only a HOUSE since the time she left. Three days without her. Life had never been so boring.
What is 55 Fiction? It is a fiction story, with all the basic elements of a narrative (plot, characters, setting, conflict), in 55 words or less (A non-negotiable rule).
And my first 55 fiction to my Grandmother who has been away for sometime now.
And here’s one more. MARRIAGE- 55 fiction
“Bloody hell! Why are you ignoring my calls and messages? Put it straight you coward.”
“It is all over between us, we can only be good friends now”
“Friends? After all that we have had that night, you call me a good friend? ”
“I never promised love or marriage.”
Hehe, enough of creativity for today :P. First attempt is satisfactory i hope?
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25 comments:
loved the nonet but loved the pic more :P
should we fight over who is who??
You are such a sweetheart dear, a very beautiful dedication :)
and your 55 fiction tries have been truly good. Someone is really on their creative path now :)
Keep it flowing, sweets!
Love you :)
a bigggggggggggggggg bear hug to my chimpu.
@ the nonet------- it's the best one. best tribute to our friendship :).. in terms of quality, emotions, ..... it's a masterpiece :) too good divz. u r d best.
@pic: its choooooo cute. just like lena , the 1st thought that came to my mind was who is who? :p
@ 55 fiction- both are too good.
u r a genious chimpu. in a one go..1 nonet n 2 55s ..wowwwwwwww.
keep on writing.
huggssssssss...ummmahhhhhhhhhhhhhh :)
@janu
lets fight on gtalk :P
i know me is a sweetheart :P
thanks janu :) love u too!!
@preeti
Thanks moti..am so happoy u liked my attempt...
55s are actually not fiction, u know that :P :P
huggiesss....ummmmaaaahhhh
wow... nice sketch to start with.. the nonnet flowed well; liked it...
You should tell her your grandma abt this... its a lovely 55...
as for the 2nd one... hmm, am jus wondering :)
take care and have a nice sunday... cheers...
the nonnet is very niice dear..very true..
the 55-fiction is so touching dear
I liked them so much..
=)
The sketch is really nice. Did you make it?
I counted too. ;)
heheh...i really want to know who is who ...really nice pic divz...
thats sooo sweet of u with the pic..:D...
55 fiction i read one in preeti's blog now in urs :D..eheh..nice one tho...really like to do one in future :P...but wat u have written was too good :)...
urs..hemu..
@arv
sketch was from deviantart :)
:)
granny doesnt understand english :P just a lil bit :)
what u wondering? :O
@pj
thanks sweety :) you always have nice things to say :-*
@divinediu
nope, this div isnt that good an artist :(
@hemu
who is who...haven't decided yet :)
thanks hemu :)
that's creative!! Where did you get this idea from actually??
The nonnet was just awesome! Even if I tried for something like that, it would've ended up lame!
55's are not fiction?????? Wooh.. That leaves something for me to find about!
@shrav
thank you..lol MY 55s are not fiction shrav :)
someone told me - who would know it is not fiction unless you told them :P :P
lovely...seriously awesome...!! *applause*
m talkin of the nonnet...it rocked...!!
about the 55's... wow...!! i haven't tried it yet...my fictions are always over 555 words i think...!! and i mean per part too!! :D
ps: my nonnet not an sms yet i hope...!! :D i don't know if thats technically a copyright infringement!! :P
Wonderful Nonet to begin with.
Congrats.
I don't know much abt 55 fiction subject, still I shd say u pulled them really well.
M sure thr r more to come.
T care.
:)
@vinay
your comments create magic ;)
writing 555 words of fiction is the tougher and i wud never be able to write one!
have u written a nonnet already?
@indu
coming from you..its an honour :) thanks indu!
wow came to know about a new thing nonnet!! Nicely written :)
The fiction was too cool
:)
yeah lukky...the latest one is a nonnet itself...the tear one...!! :)
also one in aug archive...which is a double nonnet...which goes from 1 word to 9 words and then decreases to 1 again...!! its called realease your mind...!:)
@ Divvu
Don't be sad, hun. We're pretty much on the same boat again.
Smileys is ALL i can "draw".
:)
melancholy of elise
meat
@aneesh
Thank u aneesh :)
@vinay
dropped a comment on ur blog :)
@divi
naaa :P i can draw more than just smileys :P will put up my art sometime soon :P lol
@deluded
meat? chicken or lamb? and who is elise? :(
Nonnet... thanks for introducing me to a new word!! good one... another one dedicated by u to ur dear friends... :)
abt the stories... ummm...a good attempt!! :)
Cheers!!
btw lakshmi.. how r u? :P
Thanks daadu :)
am good motu dadu...how are u?
aapke kitne daanth toot gaye?
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I've tagged you!
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Awww thanks for the dedication sweetie!I loved the pic a lot too :)
The nonnet as well as both 55 fiction were awesome!
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