Few people are blessed
With feelings so pure
But sometimes I think
It's not a good thing for sure
To love someone with the fullness of your heart
And give them the rights to hurt your soul
To let them break your trust and belief
And still make them feel you can't live on your own
Keep them close to your heart and spirit
But let them not be your everything
For some day they will be gone
And you will be left all alone
Wondering if giving someone the highest status
Is the worst thing you have ever done!
With feelings so pure
But sometimes I think
It's not a good thing for sure
To love someone with the fullness of your heart
And give them the rights to hurt your soul
To let them break your trust and belief
And still make them feel you can't live on your own
Keep them close to your heart and spirit
But let them not be your everything
For some day they will be gone
And you will be left all alone
Wondering if giving someone the highest status
Is the worst thing you have ever done!
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35 comments:
when will i get a poem dedicated to me? :O
Gosh!!! i am floooored :)
You wrote my life story in ten lines.. thanks divvu.. means a lot...
Hey its amazin wen u can pen down in a few words the entire interior of a person's heart or soul. Nice....
that's an amazing life :)
So true and touching...
Good one
:)
love is blind,it has no judgement.
so,loving with an eye on future is quite impossible.love isn't always abt getting,its abt giving,therein lies its purity.a broken heart is better than a stone heart.
@janu
the world knows about my boundless love you :P
@rahul
:) i am glad it means something to you :)
@chaggoholic
thank u :)
@sach
aila..being blessed with someone and then losing him...amazing life? :P :P
@aneesh
thanks ;)
@anwesa
as for broken hearts being better than stone hearts...god forbid but tell me the same after someone breaks your heart!
i never said love is always about giving but i think every person feels the need to be loved at some point or the other.
the rest, i agree with ur thoughts :)
One has to pass ups & downs of life.
Beautiful poem lambi! :)
And someone used to cry saying they can't do poetry :P
@hobo
hmmm he will ;)
@ moti
ya ya like i said tumhari kripa hai :P
well this poems seems to be a TRUTH.
i really liked it a lot
those were jotted down beautifully..!!
:)
woow
so cute
luved it yaar
@prajyot
wow :) someone thinks like me...truth!
thank u :)
@vinz
thanks ;)
@neha
thanks neha, by the way---> i love your name too :P
To let them break your trust and belief
And still make them feel you can't live on your own
Well said. Why do we do this? I have done this before. I want the blind folded game to stop. I want to stop playing. :)
So cute both the poem and the template.....
@mansi
why do we do that? coz we are nice people :P
loved ur blog btw :)
@karthik
aah i got my first comment on the template :P i love it too!
Its wonderful!
Is Rahul cursed or blessed?
one word...awesome..
urs..hemu..
just to find out someone you are more happy 'nd blessed with...
(called it amazing 'coz I have lived this :) no offences!)
@sneha di
thats a question for rahul to answer :P
thanks di :)
@hemu
:) thank u :)
@sach!
:) your blog is invisible :(
@solitaire: Rahul takes this curse as a blessing...
u hv captured Reality of the life very beautifully in words...
simply beautiful....
Yes, the template is damn awsome.
My 1st impulse on opening th blog was ""wow", I was amazed and shocked too, as th beauty was tooo much for me..
:)
@digant
reality...thats the word ;) thanks
@indu
thanks indu :P i know it is *wow*
Show it to mamma :P
well I always say...Im better than some but worse than others
how are you?
kin'shar
lol you're better or rather superior to me ;)
am good, how are u?
hmmm... touching lines..beautifully written.. *smiles*
@arpi di
thanks di :)
its a very nice poem chechu.
it maybe a repost, but i am reading it for the first time i think.
take care dear...
the poem was too good babe.. but the feelings that has gone behind it hurts.. do cheer up.. the new year brings with it new hope and cheer :)
Happens to me all the time... i guess its a problem with us girls... we tend to give in too much....
Happy New year...
huh?
you dont want me to comment?
what?
Superb lines. Jus loved it.
Happy new year '09
Tc,
Cheers,
Ravi.
em shoo happy you did not leave..
muuuah..the poem was b'ful and I agree with you to some extent..
we musn't give a chance to anyone and everyone to stab at our back..
muuah..n HNY
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