A sensuous touch has always healed my cuts
Many eyes have helped me through the ruts
A shoulder to the left and a shoulder to the right
Never did I feel the teeming weight
With words that could cart off the pain
They have given me the strength to regain
No, today I can't do without them
Coz for years I've been only a dependent name
Until now life's been a jolly ride
Enjoying the paradise with them by my side
A responsible position in the vicinity of my life
Yes I am worried if I can stand all the strife
Very soon we would be parting ways
Like the colorful rainbow losing its hues
But memories would still remain
Of all of us together in the rain
Many eyes have helped me through the ruts
A shoulder to the left and a shoulder to the right
Never did I feel the teeming weight
With words that could cart off the pain
They have given me the strength to regain
No, today I can't do without them
Coz for years I've been only a dependent name
Until now life's been a jolly ride
Enjoying the paradise with them by my side
A responsible position in the vicinity of my life
Yes I am worried if I can stand all the strife
Very soon we would be parting ways
Like the colorful rainbow losing its hues
But memories would still remain
Of all of us together in the rain
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15 comments:
Beautiful!Someone is into poetry now totally!Good :P
No matter where they go,true friends always remain so.
Lub boo loads.Ummmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaa
Yeeeeh me is first agains! :D
here i officially declare you the best poetess of bloggerville!
Loved the poem, sweets! And thats indeed true that that true friendship will remain through time and distances!
Love you, sweets!
PS: Sami you were first because this time this dumbi forgot to mention that she posted :D :P
Baatein bhul jaatein hai...
Yaadein yaad aatein hai.
@sami
:P a hundred credits to u :P
love u too moti :)
ummmmaaaaaaaaa
haha u r first coz there are hardly any visitors to my blog :P
@janu
lol how sweet ;) thanks janu!
@hobo
baatein bhi yaad aate hai
yaaden bhi yaad aaten hai ;)
Beautiful work there.
One of the best peoms ever read. :)
A perfect one at the time of Friendship day celebrations.
You wrote it beautifully !!
Cheers :-)
WHOAH!!!
Wonderfully written!!
Keep up!!
@indu
ahem ahem :P are u kidding ;)
@karthik
thanks karthik :)
hope u had a great time with friends!
@aneesh
:) :) thank you!
two poems in a row.. wow.. :)
lovely expression again cutie pie ..keep rocking..
Vah vah !!! bete tu poetry likhna shuru kar de padhai likhai chodkar
Khoob tarraki karegi.
@arpi di
:P :P talent di talent :P *raising my collar*
@priya
lol...ek poem jo likh diya...padai hi chod doon? tu degi kya job mere ko ;)
bete mera bas chalta toh de bhi deti, ha ha
Beautiful...very touchy...loved reading....a very good poem
@rajesh
thanks :)
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