Monday, August 4, 2008

Memories


It’s the same rain falling from the heavens…

Dousing me into memories within

It’s the same breeze touching my face…

Like you are here and I am feeling you breathe

It’s the same street I am walking through…

Today I am alone and missing your presence

It’s again the same time of the year…

Sometime ago when we were together!

16 comments:

Sameera Ansari said...

Wow!That was a beautiful poem sweetie.Those times will come again :)

Love you loads Baby.Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaa

P.S. I finally have to accept,you are the best poetess of Bloggerville! :D

Lena said...

Memories are the treasure, sweets because they make alive the most beautiful moments of our lives and even though not always people we love are there at the present, they have the same memories to share and it might be they are thinking the same at this exact moment. :)

Beautiful poem, dear!
Love you :)

Sameera Ansari said...

Yeh!!!Me is first again! :)

Do I smell something burning here? :P

lukkydivz said...

@mots

lol finally!! i want a prize for this :P

love you too mots :-*

@janu

yes janu, i love those memories :(
Thanks !! love you too :-*

@moti

cheers! ;)

Indrajit said...

A nice retreat in the memory lane.
Well done.

Sameera Ansari said...

Main hoon na sabse bada prize - moti(pearl) :P

Aneesh said...

If you feel like he's there then he's there. it's better than having someone there and never feeling it :)
Who knows, same time next year, you'll be walking along the same street holding his hands.

lukkydivz said...

@indu

thanks! but dont be too formal on my blog :P

@sami

tum moti tho ho lekin doosri wali moti :P :P

@aneesh

next year? grrr aneesh, me expecting him here at least next month :P

Priya Joyce said...

Lukky turned poet.

vaah! mast
luved it
Kya baat hai aaj kal toh sare poetry likhne lage hai.

Priya Joyce said...

beta ab mujhe samajh aaya ye ha ha pyar hai jo tumhe poet baba raha hai.


lol

Priya Joyce said...

sory its bana**

hope said...

hmmm longing.. beautifull expression.. cutie pie..
kiska hai ye tumko intzaar.. bolo na :P

lukkydivz said...

@priya

LOL :D :D pyaar nahi ....actually sameera ansari mujhe poet bana rahi hai :P :P

btw thanx for leaving so many comments here! lol

@arpi di

lol...sach boloon? aapke engagement pics ka :P LOL

Anonymous said...

I wish I was there close to that bridge.

lukkydivz said...

@hobo

hehe, tough job, i donno where that brigde is :P

Indrajit said...

Green saree wala pic. :P :P

Hmm.