Office hours were such a stress
When he returned home he just slept
Files, papers and timeless meetings
His peace of mind was by far amiss
And here she waited for him to join
The dining table that longed for their union
To talk, laugh and together dream
Was all and everything she ever asked him
He skipped his meals and often got sick
But his struggle for life forever sustained
So much into work that he never bothered
A family of four he barely looked after
When he returned home he just slept
Files, papers and timeless meetings
His peace of mind was by far amiss
And here she waited for him to join
The dining table that longed for their union
To talk, laugh and together dream
Was all and everything she ever asked him
He skipped his meals and often got sick
But his struggle for life forever sustained
So much into work that he never bothered
A family of four he barely looked after
Was she being taken for granted?
Or was the love lost in the ashes?Many questions were bothering herLeaving her depressed and insecure
The love was there concealed in his heart
How deeply he cared he failed to show her
Despite the abeyance he was always there
Pity she could not see the hidden gestures
With time she knew he was doing it all
For them alone and their children's future
One good opportunity was all he looked for
A promising career that could end the disaster
The love was there concealed in his heart
How deeply he cared he failed to show her
Despite the abeyance he was always there
Pity she could not see the hidden gestures
With time she knew he was doing it all
For them alone and their children's future
One good opportunity was all he looked for
A promising career that could end the disaster
19 comments:
A common plight.!!
well penned..!!
:)
i must agree with vinz-well penned!!
Very nice :) Just amazing!!!
Wow!Lovely poem dear :)
You have captured the situation so well.Great going my poetess!Ummmmmaaa
Btw,loved the title! :)
divvi is the best poetess out in bloggerville! :)
Good one, sweets!
Well written lukky.
Sach mein not only "she" in ur poem but many don't understand.
love needen't be shown if its there its there there's no question about it.
BTW u r awarded please take it k.
Its LIFE.
The reality of life is hard :) 'N taking work to home is bad. 'N love is to show, not to hide in heart, otherwise we'll miss the one's we love.
:)
@vinz
very common ;)
thanks
@anwesa
thanks :)
@saranya
thank u :)
@sami
lol thanks moti :-*
even i liked the title :)
@lena
;) u need not say that everytime janu, so obvious :P lol
@pj
contradiction pj...in what i feel and what u feel :P i always thought love isnt something to be hidden :P
@hobo
life? ;)
@aneesh
cheers ;) i feel the same :) our parteners will be the luckiest ones :P lol
Haha, I liked that :)
first time to ur blog..read many posts..simply superb..u writin r soo cool...this post rocks yaar...
urs..hemu..
@hemu
too much said to please me :P
thanks a lot ;)
hmm dats life..
evryone has to fight...
divi its really gud to read dear
@neha
:) can i say this again?--------------> i love ur pic :P
wow!!
must be the true story of many a life!
@arpi di
*smiles*
@pavi
yup ;)
sure baachi
thanx again
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