Saturday, September 6, 2008

Drifting apart but staying together



Office hours were such a stress
When he returned home he just slept
Files, papers and timeless meetings
His peace of mind was by far amiss

And here she waited for him to join
The dining table that longed for their union
To talk, laugh and together dream
Was all and everything she ever asked him




He skipped his meals and often got sick
But his struggle for life forever sustained
So much into work that he never bothered
A family of four he barely looked after
Was she being taken for granted?
Or was the love lost in the ashes?Many questions were bothering herLeaving her depressed and insecure 

The love was there concealed in his heart
How deeply he cared he failed to show her
Despite the abeyance he was always there
Pity she could not see the hidden gestures



With time she knew he was doing it all
For them alone and their children's future
One good opportunity was all he looked for
A promising career that could end the disaster

19 comments:

Vinz said...

A common plight.!!
well penned..!!

:)

Anwesa said...

i must agree with vinz-well penned!!

Saranya S said...

Very nice :) Just amazing!!!

Sameera Ansari said...

Wow!Lovely poem dear :)

You have captured the situation so well.Great going my poetess!Ummmmmaaa

Sameera Ansari said...

Btw,loved the title! :)

Lena said...

divvi is the best poetess out in bloggerville! :)

Good one, sweets!

Priya Joyce said...

Well written lukky.
Sach mein not only "she" in ur poem but many don't understand.
love needen't be shown if its there its there there's no question about it.




BTW u r awarded please take it k.

Anonymous said...

Its LIFE.

Aneesh said...

The reality of life is hard :) 'N taking work to home is bad. 'N love is to show, not to hide in heart, otherwise we'll miss the one's we love.
:)

lukkydivz said...

@vinz

very common ;)
thanks

@anwesa

thanks :)

@saranya

thank u :)

@sami

lol thanks moti :-*

even i liked the title :)

@lena

;) u need not say that everytime janu, so obvious :P lol

@pj

contradiction pj...in what i feel and what u feel :P i always thought love isnt something to be hidden :P

@hobo

life? ;)

@aneesh

cheers ;) i feel the same :) our parteners will be the luckiest ones :P lol

Aneesh said...

Haha, I liked that :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

first time to ur blog..read many posts..simply superb..u writin r soo cool...this post rocks yaar...

urs..hemu..

lukkydivz said...

@hemu

too much said to please me :P

thanks a lot ;)

joie de vivre said...

hmm dats life..
evryone has to fight...
divi its really gud to read dear

lukkydivz said...

@neha

:) can i say this again?--------------> i love ur pic :P

hope said...

wow!!

Pavi!!!! said...

must be the true story of many a life!

lukkydivz said...

@arpi di

*smiles*

@pavi

yup ;)

joie de vivre said...

sure baachi

thanx again