Dark hours of loneliness
Jagged shafts of emptiness
A little heart but a bagful of fears
Time and again those contrite tears
A teddy’s hug doesn’t seem to help either
After all it’s a toy and doesn’t bother
Wish the walls could talk or listen
And bring her spirits back to position
A cogent assurance that things will settle
And tremendous support in every battle
If this is all she had always pined for
An elder sister seems to be the only answer
This is for all the sisters I made here. Arpi di, Lena, Preeti, Pri, Sami, Sneha di. (In alphabetical order :P).
There are times I wish you were here.
My love for you makes it clear.
Now, all you girls…post a comment saying that Div is the best poetess of bloggerville :P :P
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13 comments:
Someone lies that they can't write poetry!Grrr
Ainda boli to mar khaegi,chocs nahi :P
Love you too sweetie!Ummmmmmmmmmmaaa
Div is the best poetess of bloggerville :D
So swee,t dear! and you say you dont write poems!! :x
I wish i could be there for you anytime you need it and want it and even when you dont want it :P
But you are always in my heart and can call me at 1 am, 2 am, 3 am, 4 am if my cell phone is not switched off :P
Love you sweetheart!!
indeed div is d best poetess of bloggerville.
feeling so lucky to be one of those lucky girls to whom u hv dedicated this beautiful poem. evn me is always thr with u..so wat we r far away.. aftrall we reside in each others heart na divvu ? sacchi it touched my heart. n yes main tujhe bilkul bhi nahi chada rahi hu. now u hv 2 write more poems. m sami ki tarah mere haatho se bhi maar khayegi tu agar ab kabhi bhi tune ye kaha ki u cnt write poems...jhoothi kahiki.
waise google pe pahale pic search kara tha kya ???/ :D :P ;)
LOVE U SOOOOOO MUCH M SHONA DIVVU...HUGGSSSSSSSSS
:):):)
Yes you are the best poetess in my bloggerville..(lie is nt a lie when spoken to make someone smile.. no? :P) ok.. ok.. kidding.. loved those lines..
and in wtr way i love being first in the list :D huggzz love u cutie pie you are such a darling.. such a nice surprise.. *smiles*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
How sweet!
You are the best poetess of Bloggerville!!
@sami
i cant write, but i wrote for you. :) love u too mots :)
@janu
lolz you said something which sami did not :D
yes lena, you are amongst the few people i first think of when i am depressed.
and about calling u at 4 a.m........err my balance doesn't permit me. Recharge my cell and i would call u right away :P
@pree
chad gayi main upar :D
ya ya we are there in each others heart but i still miss you all being here :(
na pehle poem likha tha, baad me google :P you see great poets dont take the help of pictures to write poems :P :P hehehe
@arpi di
i knew it, seeing your name first would make you happy :) and am glad it did. Love you too :-*
@sneha di
thank uuu :)
Hey Nice blog, keep up the good work. Keep posting. :)
Thanx aneesh!
the 'BEST' poetess, i dunno..heeheee
but u definitely are one of the best people ive known around here :)
thanks for the sweet dedication...i seriously wish i could be there with u during all those times u want to speak ur heart out, shed a rtear, share a smile :(
but please know that even though we are miles apart, il'l always be there for u...
take care sweets!!
(((hugzzz)))
i just read ur poem again...and must say it indeed is impressive...
maybe i will nominate u for best poetess around afterall ;)
cheers!!
and keep writing
pri, u and sami naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...ek baar keh dete ki main best hu tho kya jata tumhara :P
thank u for all those sweet words :) :-*
No scope for comment :(
ali, No scope for comment :O :O
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