For caring and loving you
With such selfless empathy
And helping you through times
When you had lost your entity
Sacrificing my self-respect
Would be nothing but a penalty!
Today the truth lay before my eyes
The real feelings behind those faked
Wonder how it took me so long
To see that selfish motive in your ways
You never realized I needed you too
I feel like I was only being used
So much self-absorbed were you
That you never bothered
What you’ve been taking away
In the false name of friendship
Once again I regret being your friend
For satisfying your needs till no end
Stop taking advantage of my love. Chahe kuch bhi ho…duniya upar neeche ho jaye…Divya mujhe chod ke nahi jayegi…
I wish I could say the same about you. Just because you know I will be there for you… you cant expect me to bear with everything you do or sacrifice my everything for you. Learn to value my love.
~
Do not take me for granted
I may not always be there
Today tomorrow or maybe later
I would leave this world
The sooner you realize this…the better
So treasure my love
Keep me close to your heart
Give me the same feeling
That you will never depart
I so feel the need of a baby right now. :(
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sometimes in life no matter how much we give and care, the other person just will not. People are selfish and pursue their own needs in the first place.. is the same with friendship.
so sometimes it is better just to let go of it, because there are always those who care, why not to turn to them then? :)
wat happen divz...it expresses sadness in ur riting..if u can say..anybody did something ...dont be sad divz...i am always there wat so ever :)..
urs..hemu..
if u say u r not the gr8est poetess...i'l call u the biggest bluffer...!! :D
awesome chechu...!! blew me away...
this is related to that thing we talked abt the other day na...i couldn't have expressed it better myself!! :)
Do not take me for granted
I may not always be there
Today tomorrow or maybe later
I would leave this world
The sooner you realize this…the better
nice stuff...!!
divz some times i feel soo lonely i think of leaving everything because of cheats but hope is only thing that is really helping me out :)...pls dont be sad ...
urs..hemu..
@lena
wow! thats exactly wat i told him :P sometimes in life..no matter how much we do for the other person..its just not enough !!
yup its better to let go...
:)
@hemz
sadness/anger/whatever :D its ok hemu.. when people realize their mistakes.. they will be back..its good to stay silent till then :)
@vinay
Plz dont gimme ur pace.. enjoy being bluffer/duffer :D
i know who can express better!
hey hemz..
light light... when you know you are right..nothing shud bother you... you shud not regret anything!
now stop crying :D
nothing i tried or not to do helps when what you feel is real, we are soulmates.
how beautiful we found each other
now i believe more
i will love you forever
we have both been horrible
@clover
may i know if u r a HE or a SHE :P
Thanks for loving me (in case u were referring to me in the comment :P )
tried visiting ur place... all private !
aww.. That's soo gross on your friend's part:(
btw, why this line??
I so feel the need of a baby right now
P.S: Who's the girl in the photo;)?
@shrav
i feel secure with lil babies :)
and i think the next question is for deviantart to answer :P
ohhkay:) how do I find you on FB??
facebook is for some realy smart people shrav... u know i cant be that smart :P :P
aww.. dumbass!! You not on facebook? So do I use this comment box as a chat site?
lolz anytime... we have orkut too :) for less smarter people..or maybe i shud say for dumb people :P
That leaves me going woooh! Cos I was once an orkut addict:):);) So i guess I'm dumber than you.. Far dumber!
How do i find you on orkut now?? :)
http://www.orkut.co.in/Main#Profile.aspx?uid=11662366322130286709
find me here :D
taking for granted...That always happens to me ...It happens..wen sumone's sure of the fact that the other person is theirs or understands them then they start taking for granted...
Loved the way u put it dear..I am touched..
Nicely expressed...
talk to ya soon... take care pls... cheers...
Beautifully written, Divya.
:)
:)
You feeling lonely or something?
Consider adopting a pet. . . . . A puppy or something.
:)
Its a well documented fact that pets increase your happiness in life, and this makes you less lonely, more unbridled and joyous
:)
poignant one..!!
last lines were wonderful...!!
:)
kya div ? y so sad? i mean i can guess from d poem but ...ok take ur tym ..i had a similar experience and still dont know how 2 get out of it
i feel that i was only being used.... deeper emotions... salutes
@pj
haha bhul gayi kya? woh mera hi philosophy tha :P :P
@arv
:) busy dadu!!
@sidd
omg.. u read minds or what? that was what i was thinking last night.. a pet..may be a rabbit or a squirrel :( but then..
i will not have the permission from my parents :(
@vinz
thank u :)
@farah
collapsed :( wondering y people dont reaize we need them too :(
:( i donno what to do...just waiting for time to bring me back to normal..though its already been a week :(
@chriz
:)
Your writing is as pure and as unaltered that it mirrors your thoughts....
:)
And a word to the wise...
Keeping pets as small as squirells and rabbits will not provide you with the affection showered upon you by a more complex-brained evolved mammal like a dog.
Coming to permission from parents, i'm sure ur parents will see ur side once you've explained to them ur reasons for having a pet.. ...
After all, they would always wanna see you happy na?
Neways, enjoy life more.
:)
Its too short to be wasted sitting in a corner and sulking.
:)
Arise and awake,
From the silence of the dark
Be right and be brave,
Tear through the evils- make a mark
Avenge ur dreams, stay not in despair
Awaken ur soul, leave it not in disrepair
:)
I've had lots of fake frndships, when i thought my frnd really cared for me, and it all ended when i would realise how i was being used. i know it feels terrible. you giving yourself to ur frnd so selflessly is commendable. but dear, i know some ppl are just too special for us, still, don't let them get the better of you. don't ever let anyone walk all over your self respect.
i wish i would have a loyal frnd as you are to her (the frnd you are talking abt here).
Keep writing Girl!
@sidd
dogs scare me.
my mom will not understand.
nice poem sidd
@sunshine
Thanks for ur comment..
i am helpless coz i am too weak. Each time i try doing something to make them realize a few things... i fail...
@ lukky
u had forgotten I juss reminded...lol
wanting more is just the character of humans.. guess it will never change... Wonderfully written
:)
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